Good stuff, I really enjoyed the script and delivery. The constant looping of the animation really threw me off though, enough that I had to scroll down around 45 seconds in. Changing up how his body moves around would greatly improve this piece in my opinion. Good work, keep it up!

Good start for a first animation. In my opinion the connection between the notebook and the death of the president wasn't very coherent. From the source content I know that the writer needs a name and a face, which is why light's shock confused me a little bit at the end. Keep working on your drawing/animating, that stuff comes with time; but for now if you work on the narrative/jokes a little more, I could see the overall quality of your animation improving drastically. Don't give up, I look forward to seeing your future work!